tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post7865034220155644713..comments2024-02-28T13:12:42.547-05:00Comments on Confessions of a Kidney Transplant Recipient: Chapter Two: Ode to My FamilyUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-2814584900429061102009-09-01T10:33:36.256-04:002009-09-01T10:33:36.256-04:00As always, I loved reading this! It was really tou...As always, I loved reading this! It was really touching, and I feel like it gave me a lot of insight into what it would be like to be in your situation, especially in terms<br />of the family breakdown. I think you did a really good job of giving an impression of your mental state, as well as the atmosphere within the family environment.<br /><br />The part about your mother's religious obsession was particularly vivid in my opinion. The bit where she told you<br />why she had an affair was chilling!<br /><br />Just one minor negative comment, and it's a small one: in a couple of places, I felt like the wording was a little bit awkward. One example that I can think of off the top of<br />my head was where you used the phrase 'two times'instead of 'twice'. It could be just me, but little things like that disrupted the flow of the writing for me in a couple of places. Like I said though, it could just be a<br />matter of personal taste.<br /><br />But forgetting that small issue, I thought it was great! I really look<br />forward to reading the rest of your story.Eva B.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-49735531081474142012009-09-01T04:15:37.910-04:002009-09-01T04:15:37.910-04:00Hi Mary!
I won't spoil your comment session w...Hi Mary!<br /><br />I won't spoil your comment session with another very long comment so I prefer to send you my comments via e-mail.<br /><br />Good job little bell! ;-)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17007601698300812905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-37665091620535686582009-08-29T10:20:23.064-04:002009-08-29T10:20:23.064-04:00Wow congratulations on posting this, please let me...Wow congratulations on posting this, please let me know if you want me to help you publicize. I admire that you can complete something that is such a long term project.AHWnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-1123797096250300062009-08-29T10:19:09.105-04:002009-08-29T10:19:09.105-04:00I just finished reading it and i really enjoy gett...I just finished reading it and i really enjoy getting to know you better! i love the way you put things into words! good job Mary!TSnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-92102127147383140442009-08-29T07:04:36.203-04:002009-08-29T07:04:36.203-04:00Hi Mary I will email you my comments, I have many ...Hi Mary I will email you my comments, I have many things to say and I don't want to share in public.<br />In the meanwhile, big hugs.Alicenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-75185840747036361682009-08-28T23:09:07.695-04:002009-08-28T23:09:07.695-04:00Sorry about the little glitches in your blog thing...Sorry about the little glitches in your blog thing. That is technology for you. As great as it is, it can still malfunction. Oh well, you can't have everything. You are one heck of a writer, although yes, this chapter was more serious than the first but the part where you mention your glow and the dark stars cracked me up and when you talked about when you ran away twice was quite amusing as well.Papnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-58066937375871256602009-08-28T23:01:47.123-04:002009-08-28T23:01:47.123-04:00This chapter was quite touching. I found myself cr...This chapter was quite touching. I found myself crying thinking of you running away from home. Thanks for posting it.Nnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-77030424718543687232009-08-28T22:59:41.444-04:002009-08-28T22:59:41.444-04:00I wish some of the parts weren't so detail and...I wish some of the parts weren't so detail and personal. Not everybody needs to look into our dirty laundry basket.Aunt Tnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8483932659364701368.post-40048588765441442822009-08-28T10:37:53.768-04:002009-08-28T10:37:53.768-04:00Oh Mary!
This chapter is really touching. I have...Oh Mary! <br /><br />This chapter is really touching. I have almost cried reading how much you suffered because your family situation. It's so brave from you to share those painful memories with us. And I think it wasn't you fault. I can't wait to read more, such a sincere and beautiful text!Mónicanoreply@blogger.com